
I do miss the campaign season–and the chance to try and analyze the rhetorical successes and misses of pol’s wordfests. A State of the Union (SOTU) speech is always a great event and worthy of dissection. Here goes:
Delivery
Adding your sense of humor to a speech can be risky. President Obama gave it a shot:
Referring to his struggles in getting a health care bill passed, Obama said dryly: “By now, it should be fairly obvious that I didn’t take on health care because it was good politics.”
And when Obama announced he wanted to hold monthly meetings that included Republican leaders, he looked at them and said: “I know you can’t wait.”
When Obama introduced first lady Michelle Obama, she sat respectfully in the gallery while others applauded. The president poked a little fun, saying: “She gets embarrassed.”
The lawmakers liked that one. via Boston Globe
An overview from Joe Klein:
This was Obama at his best. He wasn’t cuddly, but who cares? He was smart and he was funny–and he was drop-dead serious about the country. The speech should do him some good, but it’s not enough. Now he has to preside, in the true sense of the term. via Andrew Sullivan
Organization
Mr. Obama’s address clocked in just shy of 70 minutes. It was longer than the speeches typically delivered by President George W. Bush and a little shorter than those delivered by President Bill Clinton. It was nearly shorter than Mr. Obama’s first speech to a joint session of Congress on Feb. 24, 2009, when he spoke for 52 minutes. via NYT The Caucus blog
This is a much looser SOTU than I got used to under George Bush–much more house of commons–applause is shorter, but more frequent, jeers are obvious, Mr Obama is anticipating it and working off Republican hostility like a stage comic with hecklers. via Economist DiA
Persuasive Value
We expect a lot from the oratorial candidate turned President. Did he deliver?
But it is striking that Obama has learned strategic communications/framing 101: don’t repeat your opponents’ arguments. Obama focused on what needs to be done, not what the arguments are against the current plan. Very smart. And very difficult for Republicans to counter. He did it again in the section on the deficit. from Undiplomatic.
President Barack Obama checked every political box needed to restart his troubled presidency Wednesday night, but that may not be enough to consider his State of Union address a success. AP via NYT.
From blog FiveThirtyEight, an observation the President needed to exceed expectations–ideally not following the example of Steve Jobs today in the release of the iPad.
Crack WaPo reporter Chris Cillizza observes Obama’s focus on values, framing America’s historical challenge and talking about how we aren’t quitters–appealing to common instincts and setting the stage for his To Do list.
Well crafted, but needs to be followed with the hard work:
Really, I think it’s a solid speech: pragmatic advocacy mixed with appeals to American ideals of an earthy sort; not city-on-a-hill stuff, but help-your-grandmother-across-the-street ideals. He can do this every day, and he can do it intelligently and, at times, even beautifully. To what avail, though, if he doesn’t follow through and produce some real and measurable achievements? via the Economist Democracy in America
Ways to follow it so you can do your own grading, and a few parting shots:
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